portfolio trinity exam

Common Mistakes

My Common Grammar Mistakes


There is-There are


Is and are, are so different. is, is used in singular sentences


Ex: he IS so beautiful.


Are, is used in plural sentences.


Ex: They ARE so kind


Too-To


Too: To indicate something extra or to express excessiveness. Test by replacing “too” with “also” or “excessively,” depending on the situation.


To: When referencing a direction or recipient of an action (direction); when referring to a verb in a general or abstract way or when following certain other verbs, such as “need” or “help” (infinitive)

(http://www.wikihow.com/Sample/Too-and-To-Usage)


Too ex: I like to play soccer TOO.


To ex: Don't try TO be a hero.


Go- Went


Go – The present tense form of the verb (the action of “going” is happening NOW) Went – The past tense of this verb (the action of “going” is finished and over with)Go ex: I have to GO to English lessons today.Went ex: I went to Santiago last friday.http://tx.english-ch.com/teacher/mike/level-b/the-proper-use-of-go-went-and-gone/





I win- I won:



Win is in present and won is in past .


Won ex: yesterday I won a calculator in a math competition


Win ex I'd like to win this game.


http://www.learnenglish.de/vocabulary/Tenses/wintense.html



This-These


We use this and these if the item is near in time or space.


This is used in singular sentences


These is used in plural sentences


This ex: this movie look's great

These ex: I want these cakes

U.S.A vacation trip

My Vacations In Florida:


For my vacations I traveled to The U.S.A, to Florida Miami for a week. I stayed at the hotel double tree, which is in front of the beach! the hotel is situated at north Miami beach, I fell in love with the place, with the landscape, the beaches and the people also, they are really kind and are always trying to help others, that impressed me.
If i had the opportunity to go back again, i'm not going to think it twice. I absolutely recommend, the food is awesome, the place is very relaxed, the landscape is so colorful and the people in Miami beach are really kind.

If you like the beach, the relaxed places and incredible food and attention, my friend, Miami beach is for you.

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A Surprise Party

A Surprise Party


My best friend is Pancracio, his birthday was three weeks ago and I decided to make him a surprise party, because is my best friend. I spent one week planing the surprise party for Pancracio, I call my friends and Pancracio´s friend for tell them about this surprise party. One day before Pancracio´s birthday I went to the supermarket to buy some food, like potato chips, ketchup, B.B.Q. meet and all the party necessary things.
But at the pay minute I realized that i don't have enough money to pay all the food! The minutes pass and I thought to call some friends to help me with the money that i needed to pay the food.

When the day comes i don't go to school, because i needed time to prepare the party. I finished preparing the place at 3:30 pm,half an hour before than Pancrasio come's home. all the guests left early from school to come to Pancrasio's surprise party.when Pancrasio enter his house all of us shout "happy birthday pancrasio!" he was very surprised. when the party ends Pancrasio was very very tankful. The party ends and the guests went to their homes and I help pancrasio to clean her house.

Date 5/08/13

Dear Jacky

How have you been?

I'm writing this letter to you because I just know  that you want to become a television presenter! Is a very good job my dear Jacky, I'm so proud of you. I'll give you some tips in this letter of how you can be a television presenter. Firs of all you need to talk with the channel owner.It will be difficult to enter and more difficult if you aren't spontaneous, but your kind of funny, i think you will succeed in the comical area.

I really hope you can enter to the T.V. show 

Your friend Julian

Rugby match

Broked Rule

In the last rugby match on March 19 the player Jonah Lomu broked a rule, he was on the floor  and takled a guy, that is not acceptable because the rugby rules say that you can not tackle a player  if your knees are touching the ground. How I said before this is not acceptable.
I would like that the referee try to be more concentrated in the game, watch the players in the ground and had their eyes opened all the game.
Thanks and good bye.

To: felipe.c@email.uk
From: julian.G@email.com
Subject: sport competition!

Hi Felipe.
How are you?

I want to tell you that I am in a equestrian competition, if I win I can meet a famous horse rider! The one that I like is called Joaquin Larrain.
The rules are: Jump all the obstacles, finish the competition on the time and do not down the bars.
Im  training very hard, all the week and  having a healthy life style.
I really want to win and I hope to win =) Im so exited.
O.k. bye see you soon.

Guiding questions

1. Vending machines, we have found that each year vending machines grow large amount.
2. the information that we are going to use is base on websites, articles and personal information.
3. I think we have no prevention program on our school, because we have vending machines and a kiosk that sells junk food and high sugar sodas.
4. NO we dont promove the vending machines on our school.
5. no the familis are not envolved whit the school vending machine.
6. We dont have local problems in schoool because we have only one vending machine.
7. our three goals are to change the snacks, sodas and junk food that the kiosk and the vending machine sells, replace it for fruitsm, water and diet products.Make that the childrens in the mackay school bring fruit as snack and water to drink. The last of our goals is to macke a school program in where we can explain what we want to do on our school.
8. Maybe a probles is that mackay students dont like low fat products and diet sodas, so nobody would buy this products.

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ISC 0 posters correction

Patricio Garcia and I absolutely think that the second one is the best one! if full of information, is colorful and had great pic! but the images are not good pasted, just a detail doesn't  matter.
the first one is horrible, had no information, is not attractive, and had no name on it, just said sleep pyramid and its all.

I think that this activity was funny and is a good manner to  help to our teachers to correct tests, because they have a lot of work.

400 words article

Forms To Prevent The damage That Vending Machines Cause:

Hello everybody, today Im going to talk to you  about how to prevent Vending Machines damage in our children's.

The first thing we have to do or try to is to change the food and snack's sells by the Vending Machines.

If we can change the amount of sodium and calories in the snack's sell it will be a great step to prevent the obesity in children's. Now if we can change the snack's and junk food the the vending machines sells and replace it with  fruits and vegetables and diet cola a or water, we are not just preventing our children's obesity we are teaching to they to have good eating habits too.

In the U.S.A the U.S department of agriculture is proposing for food and beverages sold in school Vending Machines to prevent the damage on children's weight.The rule aim to cut down the amount of sodium,sugar and calories in the products sold to the school community.

If the vending machines change the snack's the sell, the sodium and calories that the product contain and we replace it for whole grain, fruits, vegetables, water, diet soda or daily products that contain less than the 10 percent of the daily value of calories and sodium they can continue working in much states of the U.S.A and in much more parts of the world.

The kids would grow up healthiness and stronger than if the vending machines don't change.

Thank  God that in the Mackay school we only have one vending machine from Coca-cola company, the worst rhing is that they don't sell water or diet juice, the only thing diet they sell is the coca-cola light that dislike all the Mackay students, so nobody buys the diet products.

Lucas Rinso a nutritionist graduated from Havart, the most prestigious university in the word.

Lucas said that a Coca-Cola bottle have more than the 25 percent of daily sugar, sodium and calories, that is too much for a kid, he said too that 2 daily bottles of Coca-Cola make yo to have a 60 percent more of provability of have diabetes, 80 percent of be obese and takes you 3 year less of life.

Lucas was the best student in his class, he got the best punctuation in the PSU so his opinion is very important.

We must do something, we have to make a change, not only in the school, in the world too. If we want to save our children's future. We have to make a difference, stop selling high calories products and encourage childrens to consume water, fruits and vegetables.

Thanks.

Vending Machines

My friend is trying to say that the sodas not diet and things that vending machines sells are not good in any point of view, he want a change, we want a change! And now!

Vending Machines

Here he is throwing the sugar fillerd drink away,because he realized that its not a good drink and is bad for his body.

Vending Machines

In this he looks very happy for haver bought a soda, but he doesn't know how bad are they.

Vending Machines

Here the subject is buying a sugar filled drink

Vending Machines

In this pic our friend is buying a not diet soda, high inn sugar and calories, nothing good for our bodies.

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TASK 1

You are a member of SPLAT. You will be in London accompanying Dinah. Write a letter to Auntie Alice to explain:

a. why you are going to be in London.

b. Dinah’s feelings before this final.

c. the type of organization SPLAT is.

TASK 1 ANSWERS:

auntie Alice:

Dear auntie Alice, in this card I want to tell you that i'm going to London, because my friend Dinah win´s a game called Octopus Dare, she played four whole days to win the game, it's a lot,I know but the game is so difficult! I can say that the game is impossible to solve, but how I said before, she played for four whole days, and i think it's enough time to finish and win the game.

My friend Dinah feel´s so scared about the competition and she asked to me to go to London with her. 

Her father bought her the ultimate computer to go to the final, the computer is the S-7 and is so expensive but that was the unique thing that Dinah's needed to go to the final. how I said before, the computer is so expensive and her dad had to sell the old jewelry of his grandmother, that's one of the reasons of why Dinah had to go to the final. 

Both of us Dinah and my are members of a society for the protection of our lives against them, abbreviated SPLAT, all the SPLAT members are going to try to go with Dinah to her game competition in London to keep her safe.

So o.k I want to ask yo if I cand stay with you a few days no more than 5. can i stay in your home with you Auntie Alice pleas it's very importanto to my and to Dinah to go with her. 

answer the soon as possible. thanks

Julian Gatta.

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insight vacations:

questions

1)What do people want when they travel?
2)What are the complications of independent travels?
3)What can you miss out without personal connections during your trip?
4)How does select choice work?
5)Mention the essential offered by selected choices
6)What will the person concierge do for you?
7)Do you agree with the slogan "independent touring made easy"? why?

answers:

1) The people want flexibility
2)The complication is that are frustrating and expensive
3)You can miss out: events, sightseeing, restaurants, and the local coming and goings of the city or region.
4) Select the city and add/remove night depending on how long you want to stay.
5)Transfers, premium hotels, bassage handling, tips for hotel staff, drinks, breakfast, and hosting service.
6)He/she will provide commentaries, locating sights and an insight introduction.
7)Yes I am agree with the slogan, cause on an independent touring they give you all the necessary thing for travel, like an hotel room, an transfer for go anyway you want to, and is so easy you just select the plae you want to go and the travel company fix all the rest for you, it's look cool and an easy way to travel so I can say that yes im agree with the slogan "independent touring made easy"