The Kite Runner text correction

Dear father,

Since the kite runner tournament, I been feeling not good, not good at all, and I will explain you why.

In the sky the last two kites of the competition, Amir´s vs another blue kite, when Amir finally cut down the other kite I made a promise to him, to bring back this blue kite to him, so he can show it to baba and win his respect.

I went as fast as I culd, running behind the kite, I fought a few kids for the kite and I finally win it. I was returning homewith Amir´s kite and it was late so I decided to take shorter road that would leave next to home faster, but when I started walking I crushed with Assef and his two friends, the pushed me to a dead end alley and Assef started talking. The first he said was that he wanted Amir´s kite, I replyed him with a no, I wans´t going to fail Amir. Assef punched my head with a rock and a fell to the ground. The last thing I heard was that if I wasn´t giving the kite to him I would have to do him another favour, in that moment Assef friend took me by my arms and pulled down my pants, I heard the zipper of Assef going down and inmediately I knew what was about to happen.

Now you know why I been feeling sad, i don´t trust in anybody now father.


                                                            Your son; Hassan
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