English B HL 2015: junio 2013

domingo, 23 de junio de 2013

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Patricio Garcia and I absolutely think that the second one is the best one! if full of information, is colorful and had great pic! but the images are not good pasted, just a detail doesn't matter.
the first one is horrible, had no information, is not attractive, and had no name on it, just said sleep pyramid and its all.

I think that this activity was funny and is a good manner to help to our teachers to correct tests, because they have a lot of work.

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Forms To Prevent The damage That Vending Machines Cause:

Hello everybody, today Im going to talk to you about how to prevent Vending Machines damage in our children's.

The first thing we have to do or try to is to change the food and snack's sells by the Vending Machines.

If we can change the amount of sodium and calories in the snack's sell it will be a great step to prevent the obesity in children's. Now if we can change the snack's and junk food the the vending machines sells and replace it with fruits and vegetables and diet cola a or water, we are not just preventing our children's obesity we are teaching to they to have good eating habits too.

In the U.S.A the U.S department of agriculture is proposing for food and beverages sold in school Vending Machines to prevent the damage on children's weight.The rule aim to cut down the amount of sodium,sugar and calories in the products sold to the school community.

If the vending machines change the snack's the sell, the sodium and calories that the product contain and we replace it for whole grain, fruits, vegetables, water, diet soda or daily products that contain less than the 10 percent of the daily value of calories and sodium they can continue working in much states of the U.S.A and in much more parts of the world.

The kids would grow up healthiness and stronger than if the vending machines don't change.

Thank God that in the Mackay school we only have one vending machine from Coca-cola company, the worst rhing is that they don't sell water or diet juice, the only thing diet they sell is the coca-cola light that dislike all the Mackay students, so nobody buys the diet products.

Lucas Rinso a nutritionist graduated from Havart, the most prestigious university in the word.

Lucas said that a Coca-Cola bottle have more than the 25 percent of daily sugar, sodium and calories, that is too much for a kid, he said too that 2 daily bottles of Coca-Cola make yo to have a 60 percent more of provability of have diabetes, 80 percent of be obese and takes you 3 year less of life.

Lucas was the best student in his class, he got the best punctuation in the PSU so his opinion is very important.

We must do something, we have to make a change, not only in the school, in the world too. If we want to save our children's future. We have to make a difference, stop selling high calories products and encourage childrens to consume water, fruits and vegetables.

Thanks.